Here's another loose end that I thought might be worth tying up – why are we insisting on *symmetric* monoidal preorders? The reason for this is in section 2.4.3 of Seven Sketches, and in particular exercise 2.52 – we need symmetry in order to define the *product* of two \\(\mathcal{V}\\)-enriched categories:
Suppose \\(\mathcal{X}\\) and \\(\mathcal{Y}\\) are \\(\mathcal{V}\\)-enriched categories.
Define \\(\mathcal{X} \times \mathcal{Y}\\) by
\\[\textrm{Ob}(\mathcal{X} \times \mathcal{Y}) = Ob(\mathcal{X}) \times Ob(\mathcal{Y})\\]
and
\\[(\mathcal{X} \times \mathcal{Y})(\langle x_0, y_0\rangle, \langle x_1, y_1\rangle) = \mathcal{X}(x_0, x_1) \otimes \mathcal{Y}(y_0, y_1)\\]
Checking the unit law holds:
\\[(\mathcal{X} \times \mathcal{Y})(\langle x, y\rangle, \langle x, y\rangle) = \mathcal{X}(x, x) \otimes \mathcal{Y}(y, y) \geq I \otimes I = I\\]
Checking the composition law holds:
\\[(\mathcal{X} \times \mathcal{Y})(\langle x_0, y_0\rangle, \langle x_1, y_1\rangle) \otimes (\mathcal{X} \times \mathcal{Y})(\langle x_1, y_1\rangle, \langle x_2, y_2\rangle)\\]
\\[= \mathcal{X}(x_0, x_1) \otimes \mathcal{Y}(y_0, y_1) \otimes \mathcal{X}(x_1, x_2) \otimes \mathcal{Y}(y_1, y_2)\\]
(we now use symmetry to swap round the middle two terms)
\\[\leq \mathcal{X}(x_0, x_1) \otimes \mathcal{X}(x_1, x_2) \otimes \mathcal{Y}(y_0, y_1) \otimes \mathcal{Y}(y_1, y_2)\\]
\\[\leq \mathcal{X}(x_0, x_2) \otimes \mathcal{Y}(y_0, y_2)\\]
\\[= (\mathcal{X} \times \mathcal{Y})(\langle x_0, y_0\rangle, \langle x_2, y_2\rangle)\\]
So \\(\mathcal{X} \times \mathcal{Y}\\) is itself a \\(\mathcal{V}\\)-enriched category.